Seven Wonders
Build Guide By Tauricus2017
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Anivia Build Guide By Tauricus2017
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Anivia Guide
Seven Wonders
These are going to be the things that we are going to be looking through ideally with this review.
STRUCTURE: Overall just how things are structured. Tables, Columns, etc.
CONSISTENCY: Overall how often you keep your themes accurate and similar to each other.
INCLUDINGS: Things that I may want to see in your guide that isn't there already.
MY CONCERNS: This being things not already spoken about, Ideally too much added filler (things that make no sense.)
This section of ones guide as you know should be both detailed and easy to read without being too overwhelming.
I would recommend you spread out your information and make it a bit easier to understand the early game.
You're not ALWAYS going to have enough money to afford things on your first back, so what's better to build in case the player can't afford items?
Does Anivia have really low HP / Defenses outside of her Passive, would it be better First back?
A Ruby Crystal & Amp? Kindlegem?
There are always different build paths you can choose in certain situations. It doesn't always have to be damage rush.
Overall, this is a really nice way to format things. It'll be up to you if you decide to make those changes.
As you may know this next section is the "cheat sheet" portion of the guide right below items and runes.
While you do yes have matchup information, a quick list of champions and their threats wouldn't hurt to add, for ease of access as there are plenty of readers that don't read. They simply scroll, items, runes and quick information.
You have... good structure for some portions of your guide, like the Table of contents is really well presented, but the rest of your guide following that goes down in quality around "Abilities".
Essentially it starts to break apart and become more of a mess than a neat, tidy well maintained section.
I usually add in a consistency section, but that falls in line with this above message.
Your style is BLUE to RED. Keep it that way, use it sparingly and stop putting red inside reds inside reds.
The same thing with blue inside blues inside blues, especially from top down.
You have a lot of work to do to tidy things up to make it look much more on "style" with what you are trying to do, ideally from your table of contents. The rest should follow the same format.
In the sections you post ICON - TEXT - ICON. You can simply make the icon a bit bigger, remove the right side and make it less invasive to the readers eyes while using less walls of text since the sentence will become a lot more thinner.
You alternatively could learn how to do tables.
Don't punch me! ~Cat
I was honestly stunned with how quick you were - I low-key expected to wait over a month :D
And I really appreciate the feedback <33
For the ICON - TEXT - ICON sections, I will probably keep the style I currently use. It's not that I don't think your proposed style would look bad. Not at all. I actually think it would be much better for the viewers. But truth to be told, I absolutely LOVE my current item style :D Despite its flaws and wall-of-text-iness I just love it too much to change it. If any of my readers are reading this, you heard right. Your eye well-being is less important to me than my own :D
For the Ability section... I will see what I can do. I went through more than 4 versions over the time of guide-creation and none of them looked good. I guess ability sections are my big weakness. The fact that I can't add color gradients to table borders around the text is super limiting. Forcing me to choose between red or blue - while I want both :d I will try to work it out somehow though. Worst case scenrio - I'll at least fix the "red inside red inside red" issue.
With that said your item cheatsheat ideas are great and I will definitely implement them into the guide. Same with the threats table. I agree that it is very helpful for players that are low on time. I will fix these as soon as I can (hopefully tomorrow).
Anyway, thank you again for taking the time and reviewing my guide. It means a lot to me <3
Have a wonderful rest of the day <3 (or night? I lost the track of time)
You can use or throw out my advise. It's fine, it's an opinion, not a demand.
Overall your style is RED -> Blue not
RED
|
v
Blue.
That's the biggest thing I would change.