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Overall, this is a great guide, and I've learning a great number of new things about Riven, which I will use to my advantage when playing against her >:), with the strong parts of the guide being very impressive. Which is why it's all the more unfortunate that the weaker parts of the guide are holding the amazing parts back.
Aesthetics are also important and giant walls of text aren't very attractive. I don't know, it's hard to find the balance between concise and extensive.
That would depend on the quality of the other top lane guides, which to be honest I am not very familiar with so I can't give you an accurate assessment. I would say your cheat sheet still needs improving, most notably making clear which items are not a core part of your build and can be replaced by the situational items.
Guide length alone is not enough to win you the contest, it just so happens that longer guides tend to win more because they have more information. Guides that are long with poorly presented or low quality information do not tend to win.
That's the beauty of aesthetics, when done correctly they can make walls of text visually pleasing and easier to read and digest. If walls of text are making a guide unattractive, it's not because of the walls of text, it's because of the lack of aesthetics.
Hopefully what I said proved to be helpful, if you have any more questions please let me know :)
This is probably what I'd be considering as a solid guide with a few mistakes here and there that can be fixed. You've gone far with the gameplay stuff and it shows that time has been put into it and the basic info is mostly there. Other than some of the potential improvements I suggested in my review, I think the biggest goal here for your guide that I'd recommend to focus on is expanding the depth of gameplay information you have. I feel like there are so many more things that you can maybe talk about when it comes to Riven in my opinion, and if it’s not about the champion then even just general talk about how to play top lane would go a really long way.
I hope you find the review helpful and good luck with the guide!
There's absolutely no way to determine if readers want to stop at the cheat sheet or read the entire guide since that's their decision. But most of the time, they will come back if they truly want to improve or learn more about said champion / role.
You made an application in the guide review thread, so here it is! One note: I do not play Riven at all, so my knowledge on her is limited.
The main point of improvement is finishing the basics: you should make a section explaining why you go different items and runes on Riven. This is especially important because you run an off-meta setup some of the time ( Grasp of the Undying). Besides that there seem to be some gaps between what you think you talked about in this guide and what you actually were talking about. Carefully reread your guide to make sure that you touched on all the topics you wanted to cover!
I hope you are able to do something with the feedback, feel free to reply if you have any questions/remarks.
Anyways, good luck with updating & upgrading your guide and have a nice day!