Hi man,

I will give you +Rep just for the effort making a new guide, but I disagree with your item build and these points:

* I dont think getting frozen heart is usefull, better stick with rylais scepter, it gives you lot of hp, ap and a random slow (which is nice because you dont have to).

* If you are planning in getting catalyst, get it asap because it will be a full heal/mana restore each time you lvl up. So if you can get it at lvl6 (best case in my experience if you kill minions + jungle + first kill) that will be much better than in lvl 12, better sustainability overall. Then you can promote it to ROA whenever you can, but catalyst must be even before the doran's rings.

* Im not a big fan of spell vamp, so consider adding Zhonia's or maybe Void Staff, it is your last item and prolly enemies are full of MR.

* If you want CDR, go for Morello's Evils Tome instead, it is cheap and adds nice stats.

All this comment is done from constructive mind, and trying to help your build, so best wishes to you :)

Cheers.

Thanks for the heads up on color, also for the person with the last comment, if you knew what buffs you get by using these items in that order, you would not be wondering why i have them.

more formating is needed. for instructions, check out jhoijhoi's guide on making a guide. also really dunno why you take clarity and ghost, IMO casterz need flash for surprise bursts and all. i disagree with your overall item build. doesnt make much sense to get frozen heart too. and archangels? brand is not a spammer caster, not really sure why you would want the item. consider items like zhonya's hourglass.

keep up the good work!

This comment is meant as a way for you to improve your guide.

First of, your runes:

Mgp red are perfect, so are AP quints. But Ap blues and yellows are a waste of ip/rune slots.

I suggest using mana regen yellows and magic resistant blues. This will help you stay in lane longer and the enemy ap carrie will have a harder time killing you.

Remember, survive-ability and sustain is better than damage 99% of the time.

Next, you items:

Starting boots and 3 pots are a way better option than dorans ring.
A boots start provides more sustain and makes it easier to farm/dodge skill shots.

Guide formatting:

The guide needs some proper formatting. I suggest looking up JhoiJhoi´s guide to writing guides.


Other than that, this is a good start. I suggest working on it some more.

Nice guide, but as Vern said, it could use some color and code.

Hey man it is a good start but I would recommend looking into JhoiJhoi's guide on making guides to make it prettier with more color and pictures. I can see you put effort into this guide and I won't downvote. I will just give you a fair warning that bad things may come. (: