JEFFY40HANDS wrote:
~45 minutes to kill, nothing "amazing" but I think I did alright. Could use some work on the smudging, some better text and maybe more contrast. But I like it overall.
your best yet. keep going :))
Yes the ironman is much better in my opinion because:
- Less empty space
- Smudging is better
- Lighting also better
- Focus is good too
- Text is better placed and also blends well (doesn't take much focal)
# You could sharpened some of the render to help increase focus (new layer > apply image > 10px feather around render > filter > sharpen > sharpen > set layer to 20~30%)
# Could use some burn tool around edges, especially bottom right.
# Removing top right c4d, looks odd and out of placed and ruins the direction of flow
Sorry for being blunt xD
- Less empty space
- Smudging is better
- Lighting also better
- Focus is good too
- Text is better placed and also blends well (doesn't take much focal)
# You could sharpened some of the render to help increase focus (new layer > apply image > 10px feather around render > filter > sharpen > sharpen > set layer to 20~30%)
# Could use some burn tool around edges, especially bottom right.
# Removing top right c4d, looks odd and out of placed and ruins the direction of flow
Sorry for being blunt xD
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~45 minutes to kill, nothing "amazing" but I think I did alright. Could use some work on the smudging, some better text and maybe more contrast. But I like it overall.