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[quote=Totallynotn00b][center][url=www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/hook-city-dude-hook-city-223879] "Koksei - Hook city dude hook city"[/url][/center] Eh.... I dunno honestly. Before i render judgement some questions: Masteries: You honestly believe that 6 armour from the defence tree is enough? No point into extended ward sight? Skills: Why do you max what you max? (cough cough) items: You've got a few non-sensical paragraphs... Once i have a few answers i'll give you my review.[/quote]

[quote=SkullzX][quote=Totallynotn00b] [quote=IceCreamy] [quote=OTGBionicArm] Gonna have to wait until the baby chogath trauma wears off. [/quote] I know, I will be patient :D I <3 baby [[Cho'Gath]], it's so cute! [/quote] GET OUT. [/quote] GG no re.[/quote]

[quote=totalimmortal]Your name (Prefered way of addressing you, within reason.): Totalimmortal, or just Total works. Link to your guide : [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/how-do-you-kill-that-which-has-no-life-ap-sion-guide-226787]Here[/url] Any specific points that I should look at?: Runes, because I've had mixed feelings about all of the selections I've made, and the overall layout of the guide, since guide writing isn't something that I'm accustomed to. Why should i review your guide?: I've spent a lot of time on it, and its pretty effective. Why do you want your guide reviewed?: I haven't gotten much feedback on it, and your reviews are honest and to the point. Are you wasting my time? Nahh. Have you read the reviews i give? Yeah. Are you prepared for the same level of response? Mhmm.[/quote]

[quote=SkullzX][IMG]http://i1065.photobucket.com/albums/u389/SkullzX/RAGEINCOMEING.jpg[/IMG] I am sorry! I had too! This can be your new banner for when you rate guides :)[/quote]

[quote=Totallynotn00b]Not angry enough. It more looks like he's just stabbed himself in the toe an trying not to give it away. D=[/quote]

[quote=Anastasios][quote=Totallynotn00b] Not angry enough. It more looks like he's just stabbed himself in the toe an trying not to give it away. D= [/quote] Told you, go for Morde and "Time to shred"[/quote]

[quote=Totallynotn00b][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/how-do-you-kill-that-which-has-no-life-ap-sion-guide-226787]"Totalimmortal - how-do-you-kill-that-which-has-no-life-ap-sion-guide" [/url] Um... Ok... I have no idea what level of play you herald from... no wait, i'll scratch that, I have no idea what the play is like over at NA, but the opposite is true in EU. AD sion's get raged at. Right. Onto the things I actually have issues with: [h2][u]The build/set up doesn't exactly make sense to me[/u][/h2] You've got mana yellows AND blues.... ok, perhaps [[sion]] is a mana-hungry champion. But then you start with a [[doran's ring]]? um... Your quints are CDR... Um. I Don't agree with this. Same reason I wouldn't run it on many AP mid champs. You're meant to blow people up [b] instantly [/b] rather than [i]eventually [/i]. Put it this way. [[sion]] is a ganking champion - are you really going to have time when you go ganking to wait for something to come back off CD, even with these runes? You've got [[boots of mobility]] in order to roam more. But then you decide [i] not [/i] to put points into [[swiftness]]? [h2][u]Lack of build flexibility[/u][/h2] You have zero alternative options for runes or masteries. Or at least, if you think there is no room for negotiation, then you haven't spelt it out as such. When it comes around to items.... wait, i'll shove this in the next section. [h2][u]Lack of explanation[/u][/h2] Like, let's start with runes. You want mana regen. But you haven't explicitily stated why you need them. You've written down items and stated what they do. You haven't stated [i] why [/i] you should get them, let alone in what order. [color=#ffff00]this order tends to work well in most situations. [/color]. WHYYYY?!?!?! I.e, you've got two rings in your build order.... yet don't mention them at all. Or why you get them to start as opposed to [[boots of speed]] You've split [[lich bane]] into component parts (i presume) yet don't mention anything about said components. Why would you get [[boots of mobility]] that late? I would imagine getting a D-cap be a 20-minute affair, in which you should have been ganking... Getting mobility boots [i] after [/i] the laning phase seems a bit... odd. [h2][u]You're talking ****[/u][/h2] [color=#ffff00]When you kill your lane opponent(s), don't hesitate to roam and gank.[/color] Because obviously your lane opponnent will leave you completely unscathed, because they're nice people? You're meant to push the lane with [[death's caress]], and then go roaming. Of which i'll add here - [u]the key gimmick of AP sion, roaming, is no where to be found in this guide. [/u] [color=#ffff00]Honestly, what AP champion doesn't get a Deathcap? [/color] Dunno. [[kennen]]? [[ahri]]? [[galio]]? the list goes on. On a side note, you're advocating getting this because other casters get it? That's not an overly brilliant reason... [[guardian angel]][color=#ffff00]You will no longer die, so long as you aren't caught in a 1v5. [/color] Are you seriously encouraging people to take people on 1v4? Hell, 1v2 is bad enough. [[lich bane]] [color=#ffff00]This will deal huge amounts of damage thanks to its passive, and heal you very quickly if you use Cannibalism with it.[/color] This will be a great demonstration of what i mean. If i were to do: "[[infinity edge ]] [color=#ffff00]This will deal huge amounts of damage thanks to its passive, and heal you very quickly if you use Cannibalism with it.[/color]" It wouldn't be wrong. Ergo, it's not up to scratch... since the two items clearly arent the same. [[deathfire grasp]] [color=#ffff00]Just raise shield, stun, and use Deathfire Grasp's active ability.[/color] You should be opening with DFG -.-' [color=#ffff00]First off, you should initiate,[/color] [color=#ff0000]DEAR GOD NO. [/color] Initiating on morons doesn't count. It's not your job to initiate the fight, even as [[sion]]. Since your only real initating move is [[cryptic gaze]], who are you going to use it on? You state it yourself - the AD carry. Ergo, by your own logic, [i] you should not be initating [/i]. Otherwise, you're suggesting you initiate by walking up to the enemy team... and keep walking at them. Which i seriously hope you're not. Conclusions: I'm feeling nice. No vote.[/quote]

[quote=totalimmortal][quote=Totallynotn00b] ..I have no idea what the play is like over at NA, but the opposite is true in EU. AD sion's get raged at. [/quote] Huh, that makes sense, but its weird for it to actually happen. I usually come across about 10 AD Sions before seeing a AP Sion, and then they're usually just plain bad. You're right on pretty much every point, really. I assume parts of the guide should just make sense because it makes sense to me, which I've been trying not to do. [quote=Totallynotn00b] But then you decide not to put points into Swiftness? [/quote] ...your point is well taken. [quote=Totallynotn00b] You have zero alternative options for runes or masteries. [/quote] I left a note in the introduction saying that some parts of the guide are incomplete. [quote=Totallynotn00b] You've written down items and stated what they do. You haven't stated why you should get them, let alone in what order. [/quote] I really didn't think about item explanations too much. I'll get on that next. As for the order, the purchase order in the cheat sheet is just that. I could've sworn I wrote a section on purchase order, though >.> Strange. [quote=Totallynotn00b] Dunno. [[Kennen]]? [[Ahri]]? [/quote] Honestly just saw both with Deathcaps in the last game I played. [quote=Totallynotn00b] Are you seriously encouraging people to take people on 1v4? Hell, 1v2 is bad enough [/quote] Again, I was assuming that reader knew what I know. Obviously 1v2+ should be avoided. [quote=Totallynotn00b] Initiating on morons doesn't count. [/quote] Awww :( Overall, this actually went better than I thought it would. I was expecting a down vote for sure :b Thanks for pointing out things I would've left overlooked for who knows how long.[/quote]

[quote=Totallynotn00b][quote=totalimmortal] [quote=Totallynotn00b] ..I have no idea what the play is like over at NA, but the opposite is true in EU. AD sion's get raged at. [/quote] Huh, that makes sense, but its weird for it to actually happen. I usually come across about 10 AD Sions before seeing a AP Sion, and then they're usually just plain bad. You're right on pretty much every point, really. I assume parts of the guide should just make sense because it makes sense to me, which I've been trying not to do. [quote=Totallynotn00b] But then you decide not to put points into Swiftness? [/quote] ...your point is well taken. [quote=Totallynotn00b] You have zero alternative options for runes or masteries. [/quote] I left a note in the introduction saying that some parts of the guide are incomplete. [quote=Totallynotn00b] You've written down items and stated what they do. You haven't stated why you should get them, let alone in what order. [/quote] I really didn't think about item explanations too much. I'll get on that next. As for the order, the purchase order in the cheat sheet is just that. I could've sworn I wrote a section on purchase order, though >.> Strange. [quote=Totallynotn00b] Dunno. [[Kennen]]? [[Ahri]]? [/quote] Honestly just saw both with Deathcaps in the last game I played. [quote=Totallynotn00b] Are you seriously encouraging people to take people on 1v4? Hell, 1v2 is bad enough [/quote] Again, I was assuming that reader knew what I know. Obviously 1v2+ should be avoided. [quote=Totallynotn00b] Initiating on morons doesn't count. [/quote] Awww :( Overall, this actually went better than I thought it would. I was expecting a down vote for sure :b Thanks for pointing out things I would've left overlooked for who knows how long. [/quote] Bah. When I wrote my guide, i didn't want to write half of it. "This stuff is god-damn obvious... right?" You're better off spelling it out. A) so it looks like you know your stuff, and B) you don't leave room for doubt. Or C), don't leave room for downvotes ;> [color=#ffff00]I really didn't think about item explanations too much. I'll get on that next. As for the order, the purchase order in the cheat sheet is just that. I could've sworn I wrote a section on purchase order, though >.> Strange.[/color] I mean, explain *why* that is your order. Not what your order is D= Dw. I was in a not-so-pissy mood today. It was bordering on a -1, but you didn't exactly say things which were blatantly wrong... like "[[cleanse]] getting rid of [[infinite duress]]" <.> That would have made me rage harder for sure.[/quote]

[quote=da_neo]da_neo http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/annie-hide-and-seek-testing-ground-101351 Any specific points that I should look at?:Everything Why should i review your guide?: Becuz of reasons Why should i really review your guide?: Cookies, Cookies everywhere Why do you want your guide reviewed? : I did have a guide. Got shredded my troll voters. Want to revive it. Are you wasting my time? Probably Have you read the reviews i give? nope Are you prepared for the same level of response? Yes It's an archieved 0 votes guide, but it 100% matches my real guide which is expired right now. Copy and pasted each chapter. I dont even know if I can call it a guide. I just wrote everything I could think of and gave my opinion to it.[/quote]