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[quote=jhoijhoi]Apparently my guide is 23,000ish words ^^[/quote]

[quote=Devilesse]Guide For: Teemo: Durable AD/AS Teemo Made Quick and Easy. Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Constructive Criticism if it's needed? What I'd like you to focus on: Everything in the guide. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/teemo-durable-ad-as-quick-and-easy-96615[/quote]

[quote=wRAthoFVuLK]^u have a guide? I thought you were like lvl 15 O_O[/quote]

[quote=Sacull_Kinslayer][quote=jhoijhoi] Apparently my guide is 23,000ish words ^^ [/quote] I read through your guide. Holy crap! I thought I was long winded lol.[/quote]

[quote=Devilesse][quote=wRAthoFVuLK] ^u have a guide? I thought you were like lvl 15 O_O [/quote] *plays music* They see me smurfinnnnnn', they hatinnnnnn' (Well, not really hating.) This isn't my first account, but it is now my main.[/quote]

[quote=wRAthoFVuLK]why are you maining your smurf? O_O[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]Response (took a long time sorry): [quote=jhoijhoi] Constructive Criticism: 1) There's a reason why people suggest buying 3x Avarice Quints. Alone, they are useless. You really need the 3 to produce results. 1 Avarice Quint gives you 0.1 gold per second. Absolutely worthless. You get roughly 1.5 gold per second in-game. You know what, I won't even continue because Avarice Quints are awful in comparison to items like [[kage's lucky pick]], [[heart of gold]] and [[philosopher's stone]]. Quints of Fortitude would do you better. 2) Quints of Swiftness? D: Why? [/quote] Old runes I had intended to change eventually, other things had taken priority. [quote]3) Flat mana runes are silly. It's even worse that you've decided to go Marks of Mana, considering those are Secondary Runes.[/quote] Fixed [quote]4) [[infuse]] = infinite mana, why do you have mana regen runes. Runes that you should have on Soraka (or any mana support champion): Cooldown, health, magic penetration.[/quote] A.[[infuse]] is a major harassing ability of Soraka's B. it has a long CD even with 40% CDR [quote]5) Your Ability Sequencing is all over the place. As I said in another review, level up the most important, or simultaneously level two abilities and leave the last for last. So in the case of Soraka: R > W & E > Q[/quote] Generally ability sequence should be based on the game. An explanation is in the guide if you care to read it. [quote]6) Why not [[doran's ring]] over [[doran's shield]]?[/quote] Soraka has a starting armor of 11, dying isn't worth that extra AP/mana regen. [quote]7) No early [[spirit visage]]?[/quote] It's in the situational items, I don't usually get it myself (why would a mage Soraka have one?). [quote]8) If you wanted gold/5, you could stack Kage's, or buy the other two items (Kage's, HoG and Philosopher's are pretty good on support, imho)[/quote] Already has a lucky pick and I'm going to add other GP/5. [quote]9) You decided to go Mage Soraka, but didn't go for the 15% Magic Pen in the offense tree?[/quote] fixed [quote]10) It is really hard to read your Summoner Spells section due to the continuous colour changes and brightness of said colours. Only the spells themselves should be in colour - the rest should be white, or at least colours that don't hurt the reader's eyes.[/quote] Will fix this [quote]11) Don't list spells that you wouldn't take. Why mention them?[/quote] Because enough people go to guides to learn how to play a champion that you should treat it like you will be teaching new people (unless you put specifically that it's for advanced players only). [quote]12) With cooldown runes, you should be spamming [[infuse]] as much as possible.[/quote] It's kind of stupid to spam it constantly for mana, especially if you are actually playing a Mage Soraka (then you should be harassing with it). Also: CDR runes aren't cheap, as nice as it would be to have them, so it's really not reasonable to expect people will buy them because you say to.[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]^You should state the runes you would use if you had them, no matter how expensive, and then list the alternatives for people who haven't bought them/can't afford them. As Jebus once said to me, "Write your guide as if you were catering for the pros, and it'll turn out better than if you were writing it for noobs."[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]The runes stated now are the runes I actually use. I've gone through a few pages and these are what I prefer.[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]Was totally going to review: Vladimir's Blood Resource: Post Nerf Edition By: Sacull_Kinslayer But I kinda got sidetracked coz of this link in his link section: http://www.leagueoflegends.com/board/showthread.php?t=608154 Totally your own fault for linking it.[/quote]